Thread:Shado supreme/@comment-25600892-20180308232135/@comment-26059868-20180423143527

Great. One other thing: do you see how I wove her love interest(s) into her character? They are both a vital part of her story, and she a vital part of theirs.

Once again, it's your story, you can do whatever you want, and I apologize if I come across a little controlling (I feel like I am), but you don't want to have a love story and have it just be... there.