Thread:Shado supreme/@comment-25600892-20180508222738/@comment-26059868-20180530020519

You've improved slightly. Keep up the work, and don't be afraid to go back and make some edits to earlier chapters. What I said about, "It ain't the best, but it ain't the worst, so I'm just gonna roll with it," still applies, but you should still strive to enhance your skills. Maybe just start off with adding in some minor details, or more action. The fight scenes in your stories so far are just kinda bland.