Thread:Moose513/@comment-25372003-20170923222210/@comment-25372003-20170930020924

Well, for the most part, it was good, but there's just a few things I'm gonna tweak:


 * 1. Instead of Doki dropping the ring into the batter on his own, a fly enters the clubhouse, and Fico tries to get it, and it lands on Doki, so when Fico goes to swat it, he accidentally hits Doki with the fly swatter, which startles Doki so much he drops the ring into the batter.
 * 2. James will arrive at the park after the judging.
 * And 3. Steve, Joe, and Fred will be the judges at the contest.