Thread:Shado supreme/@comment-25600892-20180308232135/@comment-26059868-20180312193001

Ok. We're still on Swagger, though. Early on, back when I was writing Pups and the Batlle for Earth, I made the mistake of writing the character to fit the scene. That meant how the character acted was dictated by the scene, but it should be the other way around. It ended up with a lot of random changes in attitude, etc, for no apparent reason.

Thats why you need to make sure you know the relationships between all the characters. It can be hard, and it takes a while, but it's worth it for a good story.