Thread:Shado supreme/@comment-25600892-20180308232135/@comment-26059868-20180425215351

Then why don't you describe the training? You tell the audience that, "it's hard, and they failed", but you never actually show us what made it so hard, or why Orion was so completely demoralizd with their failure.

You need something to get the audience invested in the story. If you don't want to include any action, that's fine, but then you need to go really deep with characterization.