Thread:Moose513/@comment-33744259-20190914195635/@comment-33744259-20190916170603

Alright. Here's a new idea for how Smudger and Marshall's teddy bear could be worked into it:


 * Instead of Smudger breaking in and stealing it, he could snatch it from Marshall while the Gresley brothers and the pups are hanging out in the park and throw it into a tree.

And two for the story itself:


 * When the pups visit the Narrow Gauge Kids, they could ask them what they want to be when they grow up, and these could be their responses:
 * Skarloey: He doesn't know yet
 * Rheneas: Cartoonist
 * Sir Handel: Comedian
 * Peter Sam: Art instructor just like his idol, Bob Ross
 * Rusty: Professional musician
 * Duncan: Video game designer


 * Skye and Everest could admire Gordon for his strength and ask how he got so strong, and he tells them that he used to visit the local gym every day after school with his schoolfriends.