Thread:Moose513/@comment-33744259-20181016233410/@comment-33744259-20181021011143

It went the way I wanted to. However, there are a couple things I'll be adding into it when I go to write this:


 * I'll be extending the ending by showing a scene where the boys come home and see Edward, whom Skarloey tells about his (Skarloey's) first day.


 * In the recess scene, there will be a spot where Skarloey goes to play on the slide, but Daniel gets there first, and the former lets him go first.